rotten angel

Playing on my mobile phone, android on Chrome, I can't click any options besides my name when entering...

I don't have a computer or a laptop. Hopefully, it's possible if you can make it into an App for me and the rest in the future. I enjoyed the sweet Valentine's and was desperate for more games to play; sadly, I'll keep waiting! I will support your work with a 5/5 positive rating because you deserve the credit and attention given the visual novel Otome (BL, I love it when BL becomes a part of the main focus too! Unrequited love, such delicious Angst and amount of reject for MC from the prior game!) and the number of surprised choices you make matter and have an MC who is likable and not a typical sweetheart! I want more crazy and twisted MC! 😭🙏🏻

I wished I could play your other games, but I was gonna mention only the web browser of your game; it is giving me a hard time adjusting and playing; I barely started and am stuck on the MC name being confirmed... With no clickable options... 

I love the loading screen and your artwork, your improvement, and your inspiration for making my own VN; someday, I want to do something similar if I can practice and draw a fanart of your characters! 

Btw this is the problem I'm facing, any explanation will definitely help me solve this issue!

I swear I play otome game to have a rest  in BL but damnnn  BL keep following me and it was just fit my cup of tea??! help i might need a therapy soon looll!

MY GOD!!! This was both insane, and amazing. Although for some reason I thought MC would turn into an angel of some kind, (mainly because of the name) BUT THIS WAS SO MUCH BETTER??? I love just straight up insane characters, and i ADORE how the title screen changes based on which route you take. Absolutely 10/10 game, and ill definitely be playing some of your other games soon!!^^

yea i was waiting for it to be bit unhinged but.... WHAT THE ACTUAL F**K... like jesus.. good game tho

edit: btw why US NOT BEING A CHEATER gets the shit ending for evan!! like mannn wtff

TIME TO REVIEW THIS GAME!!!

Visuals, Story, and then characters.

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Wow. After playing Wttfm just a few hours ago before this one. The game visuals left me SPEECHLESS. Srsly, mouth hung low and open WIDEEE up.

I love how beautiful the game looks, the sound effects of hovering over options, how its not a black box anymore. Not only did the art improve, coding did too. I LOVE THE ARTSTYLE. Like hwow. THAT SHADING AND RENDERING IS INCREDIBLE!! OH MY GOSHHH THE CHARACTERS LOOK SO GOOD. The artist did so well. I love it. The dialogue box is so diverse, i love it.

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I did not expect to end up DEAD right away, that was crazy. The tense scene in the car was really really tense. The story was a little obvious to me when I first started, i was gonna get killed and one of the brothers did it.

I had a gut feeling that it was engel and i was correct!!! THE DIALOGUE IS AS CONSUMABLE AS USUALLLL so nice reading through it. It feels super natural and real, just like all your other games.

I got the ending where Evan kills Engel, I DID NOT EXPECT THAT AT ALL.. I thought they were going to bury the body or crash the car.

I played again obviously. Since I made the first mc a cheater, i made this one have a ton of affections to Evan, bc hes a cutie!!

So I unlocked the second ending... AND ENGEL IS ACTUALLY INTERESTED IN HIS OWN BROTHER? Next time, i should def read tags :skull: MY JAW WAS HUNG LOW AND I MEAN LOW. THAT WAS SOME CRAZY EFFING SHOCK VALUE. But when you do replay it, it still feels natural, it feels like there subtle hints to it already. 

But GOD I DID NOT EXPECT THAT AT ALL. DID NOT EXPECT IT A SINGLE BIT. WHEN ENGEL LUNGED ON EVAN?? I WAS FEARING THE WORSE. Thank god home boy didnt die :(

UGHH SEEING ENGEL AFTER THAT WAS SO CREEPY. Its sad to think that Evan is stuck in the basement in that ending.. I really hoped he was gonna get let go. 

Evan, he deserves better. Someone get this guy into therapy, a good lawyer, and a loving circle

Engel, throw that man into a psyche ward. AND BRING ME BACK FROM THE DEAD SO I CAN BEAT THAT BOY'S REAR.

Def one of my shorter reviews. I love the amount of details poured into this game and its a treat. I love the contrast between the siblings. For a short game, it still has that beautiful writing I fell inlove with. Its a truly beautiful game. I cant wait to play more of your productions soon... Lovely work Sylvan!!!!!

As expected, the attention to detail is splendid. You can really see the subtle hints of Engel's true feelings for Evan.

There's something very funny about this being tagged as containing 'boys' love content', since I don't think the content present is all that loving... Wouldn't boys' hate be more accurate? lol
Well I guess it depends on whose POV you're viewing the story from (and you can play as a male MC I guess...)

The art for this is absolutely gorgeous. I love both of the character designs, and there's so much attention to detail. They're both so expressive (well, Evan less so haha), and it's really nice how the main menu changes after each ending. It's such a nice attention to detail!

I love the UI, it's really polished and pleasant to look at, and the music you picked out is perfect too.

As for the story, it's really interesting and innovative. I've never read a VN where the MC dies at the start haha, the way the choices are framed is really interesting too. I think the writing itself is a little spotty (the narration swaps between past and present tense a bit, and there's some unnatural phrasing which made me do a double take), but I never had any issues comprehending what was happening. The two main boys are consistently written and quite charming, too.

It was a very polished experience, you did a great job! I really love the aesthetics of this one, it's a real standout among all of the Spooktober entries I've read!

Mmmmm yes👌

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Twisted twincest, exactly what I need most in my life. Not gonna lie, when I first saw the game page, I was like: "Who the hell is this eyeless generic otome MC? I hate self-insert !!111!!1!" Then I actually laughed when the first scene was us choking to death. It was at that moment when the sadist within me knew that this game would be a blast.

On a more serious note: It's really impressive how well you managed to develop the characters in such a short amount of space!

My favorite scene is actually the police scene - that Evan, the guy who has been giving off the "emotionless high-performing sociopath" vibe, is the one who knows he might not be able to handle the interrogation without being suspected, while Enjel is the who switches faces as fast as a light bulb ... only to almost immediately confess how nervous he really was, only to have Evan act surprised by it. This scene establishes the dynamic between them so well! Evan is cold on the outside but hot on the inside, while Enjel is timid outside but unflinching within, and how Evan thinks he knows Enjel inside-out even though he really doesn't ...

And I suppose just adding more to the "inside-out" theme, the character designs are just awesome: Evan wears grayish-blue within but black outside, while Enjel wears black inside but grayish-blue outside. The duality between the twins is captured so well both in the writing and the art!

To be frank, as someone who has read tons of messed-up VNs, I wasn't entirely surprised by the ending, but this absolutely doesn't mean I haven't enjoyed the game. To have a reader dwell on the ending and the characters even though they saw the twist coming, is some of the greatest signs of a writer's talent! 

i've finished it just now,both of the endings were shocking but Enjel's Ending was more I did NOT expect that outcomee,that was crazy but it was excellent and I loved how their personalities are opposites,it showed especially when Evan didn't understand Enjel's feelings 

you know what. good for evan.

this was so neat!! the artstyle is so lovely and the dialogue flowed so naturally

I should've known when the MC wears the anime mom hair, we are so f***ed lol!

revive me so I can beat his ass omg 

The endings were really shocking and I didn’t see it coming, but upon replaying it, I could see the subtle signs that were flowered throughout the game! I could tell a lot of thought went into the game and the format was delightful! The art/design was haunting, especially the color choice, and I feel like the motif was very strong throughout! The writing was charming, and the song choices made it super immersive! 

Overall I love this game and I can tell how much the development team loved it too since it’s detailed project! I’d love to hear more about the characters!!!!

I didn’t read the warnings before downloading, so you can imagine how the end was a complete flashbang, lmao :’D

Real talk, though, I adore the presentation of this game. While playing it I loved how professional it just all felt. This feels like a product that should cost money, even if it is incredibly short. Wonderful art, horrifying writing and storytelling, and intriguing characters I just want to learn more about. I love this story and seriously wish for more of these characters. (But I also understand you can only do so much for a gamejam lmao.)

10/10 would feel the overwhelming dread and fear from this story and characters again 👍 And I’m sorry to Evan for not trusting him to start.

Another banger! This is the first time I figured out one of your classic plot twist early on (honestly, I thought it about more as a stretch/what-if -- only to for it to be true!) I really enjoyed the overall style and mood of the game as well as the little backstory we got with the twins and Player. 

With Player's default name, I did thought that they would played a more devious role despite what happens. But, regardless, it still worked within the theme! I loved what we had and glad to have played another game of yours <333

A new game ahh! I'm very excited to check this out, the UI already looks so good from the screenshots!

ദ്ദി(˶‾᷄ᗜ‾᷅˵ ᵕ) the art look so familiar

Poor Even, boy has its hard ether way.